It is truly my great honor to receive an offer to enroll in the Office Administration – Legal program at Conestoga College, Ontario, Canada. Conestoga College is known for providing students with great education in legal studies, and is one of the best amongst all institutes that offer the equivalent programs. The world-class education and the promising opportunities it brings are highly attractive to a person like me who is pursuing her career as a legal assistant.

　　In a world involving increasingly large numbers of international trades and personal conflicts,legal issue has become an essential part of the daily life for almost everyone. And possessing great knowledge in this area surely enhances the quality of living and allows one to be able to deal with various issues with the correct attitudes and find the right solution. It will undoubtedly be a great pleasure to pursue a designation in this program at Conestoga College.

　　Receiving complementary education in this area in Canada is not only a way to immerse in the great learning environment, but also a mean to broaden the horizon. Conestoga College has unparalleled experiences in dealing with and helping international students to achieve their goals, and this is what I highly value, as it will assist me to understand differences between the different legal systems more thoroughly. Although China is also agood place to study, for me, a person who works for one of the top 10 American law firms, the education I receive at Conestoga College is going to be extremely helpful.

　　As an entry level staff at XXX, the chance of advancing to a more respectable position will be greatly increased with a diploma in Office Administration –Legal from Conestoga College. The knowledge of the western legal system I obtain from Conestoga College will also allow me to serve the foreign clients that come to XXX’s branch in shanghai. I have no siblings in my family. Therefore I am responsible for taking care of my retired parents. Going back to China after I successfully graduate from the program will ease the burden of supporting my whole family.

　　I sincerely appreciate your time and consideration,and I look forward to hearing back from you.

　　PS：XXX=公司名

　　專家拙見：

　　IDP項目辦公室顧問老師覺得SP要寫得合情合理，要符合每個人的自身情況，以著重突出渴望學(xué)習(xí)為主，在邏輯順序上凸顯合理性。特別要把學(xué)習(xí)放在第一來寫，經(jīng)濟擔(dān)保，回國理由都只要帶到就可以了，主次要分清。

　　邏輯順序按照：

　　選擇的學(xué)校（及專業(yè)）==》選擇的原因（突出為什么要特定在國外學(xué)，突出在國外學(xué)比在國內(nèi)學(xué)的好處）==》按照該學(xué)習(xí)計劃所帶來的好處（突出將來回國后給自己帶來的收益，不要僅僅寫金錢，因為留在加拿大也可以賺很多，找點特殊的原因?qū)懀?=》回國的理由（要很肯定且理由很強大，寫父母，IDP項目辦公室顧問老師覺得要寫的有情有義。）關(guān)鍵要結(jié)合自己的具體情況，一步一步寫下來。